Writing Natural Non-Fiction

I recently wrote an article, Writing Naturally whereinstory to a particular viewpoint. You want to provide
someone commented that they liked the article foryour readers as much as possible with a 360-degree
fiction, but how could one apply these sameview of what you're writing about.
techniques to nonfiction.Use your viewpoint characters creatively.
Creative nonfiction is a compilation of facts about aIf your nonfiction piece involves interviews - let your
particular subject or event and may include interviewsinterviewees or characters describe the scenes for
and more than one side or viewpoint of the subject oryou. Get them to tell you in their own words, what
event. The writing down of facts can be particularlythey saw, what they felt, what they touched with their
boring. You surely cannot input your personal opinionfive senses and bring it into your piece.
into this type of piece if you're not writing an op-edPeople, when they talk naturally, can be quite eloquent
piece. So how to you keep you readers involved andsometimes. Use it. Use it all.
moving through the story?In the mountain ranges along the Merced River on the
A nonfiction piece is written in much the same mannerway to Yosemite, one year we had one hell of a fire.
as a fiction piece, only the facts are not made up. SoThis fire called for the use of the big bombers,
how do you bring in the creativity?helicopters, walking fire crews and teams from the
Good nonfiction writing incorporates vivid imagery andYouth Authority. Firefighters make good use of words
description.in their descriptions, which add the depth and the
One of the most boring news pieces in a weeklyintensity that you would need in this kind of story.
newspaper setting involves reporting PlanningI could feel the hair on the back of my neck sizzle, said
Department business or events; yet growth, newfirefighter Joe Blow, and I knew something bad was
development and the building of a large new shoppingabout to happen. Sure enough, not 100 feet from
center in town, was definitely of interest to the locals.where my crew was cutting a fire line, all the trees
One reporter that worked at the Mariposa Gazettealong the top ridge exploded.
and Miner used this as a lead into a story about newAnd you don't necessarily want to clean up your
development:quotes from these type of interviewees. Their
"The Sugar Tree Shopping Center crossed a paperparticular syntax adds color and flavor to your piece
bridge today and moved closer to its initialand puts the reader right into the story.
groundbreaking. The Planning Commission, in a 5-0Use your own viewpoint for description
vote..."One mistake that writers make is that they think that
Without having to repeat the boring stuff said in one oftheir own creative description of the scene is not
these meetings, the reporter let everyone know upallowed in nonfiction writing. Not true. Remember earlier
front that movement was occurring on this project aswhere we discussed that you were the eyes, ears,
well as informing them that some of the processesand etc., of your reader? This is a fact. Your
were being accomplished.experience at the scene is valid to print.
As a reporter, you are the eyes, the ears, the nose,The burnt timbers cast skeleton shadows in the early
the mouth and the hands and feet of the people whomorning sun. Earlene and Bill Jones woke up to nothing
are reading your stories. You are the one to providemore than smoke and ash. Firefighters from four
them with an awareness of your subject throughprecincts were called out on this 3-alarm blaze just
these senses. You tell them what you see, hear, smell,past midnight, but by then, according to eye witnesses,
taste and touch. This will bring more creativity into yourthe house was already lost. . .
nonfiction article without taking away from the factualThis is just an example of using the visual sense in
basis or the truth of it.describing the event of a house burning. Use
Nonfiction simply means that the events as written aremetaphors, allegories and whatever else strikes your
real. The piece is totally fact-based. But it doesn't meanfancy when writing nonfiction.
you can't be creative in your description of these facts.Remember - just because you're not creating the
You just can't be creative with the facts, nor slant thefacts doesn't mean you can't be creative.